

First, many criminals were captured by using this method. Putting pictures of the criminal has been highly successful because by informing the general public existence of the criminal and urgent necessity to catch him, we were able to induce voluntary actions of people, which will also help us catch Kony. There are ample precedents of using video to catch criminals. Furthermore, it will make people get involved and to the project, such as financial donation. With such help from public, Kony 2012 will also be successful in catching the bad Kony.

Second, this video can actually make countries and Ugandan people to stop supporting the LRA. It can make Sudan or threatened people to stop supporting the LRA and tell them how it is safe in the United States of America and give an example such as Jacob, how he is safe now.
In addition, it can influence the government and the world. The reason that the United States of America's government decided to help Uganda is that this video and those who watched convinced the president of the government to take action. Kony 2012 will catch Kony. given the global attention and assistance.
In conclusion, I agree with the use of this video to catch Joseph Kony because many criminals were captured by this method, this video can actually make countries and Ugandan people to stop supporting the LRA, influenced people to catch Kony and because it influenced the government and the world. I think Kony should be stopped.
This is a good essay. It is well-organized and presented. You should include the opposing ideas and a rebuttal. Next time, also include the "Kony 2012" video and explain more about it.
ReplyDeleteGood! I think it's a good point that you make - that many criminals were caught by being made famous. I think your introduction is too long compared to the rest of your arguments, and if you can, I think you should try to lengthen your arguments. For example, in the second argument, explain how not supporting the LRA will help the situation. I know this seems obvious to you, but it isn't to a lot of people. We need to know exactly what you mean. I hope you work on that :) Excellent job!
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