Friday, July 27, 2012

My first essay!!!!!!

 Hello. I am Steve the owner of this blog. From now, I will tell you three things that I know to be true. I chose these three things because they are somehow interesting. I am writing this because it is my GLPS writing assignment. The three things are bananas are not good when it rots. Next, aliens exist and finally the dormitory is dirty and there are many bugs in the dormitory.

 Bananas are not good when they rot. If it rots, yellow color turns into brown and flies lay eggs on the bananas. Also, it becomes slimy so if you bit a bit, it will collapse. You will get sick. Since there are many bacteria and bugs, if your immune system is weak, you might get sick for a long time.

 Aliens exist. There is a case called Roswell case I think. The U.F.O crashed on a city called Roswell. There are witnesses and there is a dead alien. The second piece of evidence are pictures and photos of aliens and U.F.Os. There was a picture of a U.F.O in a Egyptian tomb. Also, someone took photos of the U.F.O in Seoul and other countries such as the U.S.A, Mexico, China and Brazil.

 The last thing is GLPS dormitory is dirty and there are many bugs. There are spiders underneath the desks. When I first came here, there was hair everywhere and there was dust in the drawers. Also, there were chip crumbs in the drawers. When I went to the laundry room, there were the second version of grasshoppers everywhere. The second version of grasshoppers have parasites that eat organs. Finally bottom, there were bugs everywhere and the mosquito net had holes in it so flying bugs such as moths and mosquitos came inside my dormitory. 

In conclusion, the three things I know to be true are bananas are not good when they rot, aliens exist and the GLPS dormitory is dirty and there are many bugs. Please leave a comment if your done reading. Thank you for reading.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Steve! I'm your Writing TA Won-Woo. I enjoyed reading your essay. It has quite interesting subjects, especially about the UFO. I also agree with you on the dormitory since I was also a KMLA student who had quite a trauma with bugs. Overall, the essay is quite good. Keep up the work! :D

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  2. Good job on your blog. Remember you should use pictures, videos or links to support what you are writing. This makes the blog more interesting. Also, try to write a longer conclusion to end the essay.

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