Thursday, August 16, 2012

The flying boy (chain writing)

      One day, a boy got powers to fly. He enjoyed flying and he flew. When he flew, hesawthe whole world. However, the only problem was that he couldn't land. So every time he saw people, he shouted to people. "Please help me!!!!" But the most important problem was that other people couldn't hear him . So he kept on shouting louder and saw an airplane. He flew to the aiplane but the boy was super small compared to the airplane so it hit him. He fell and landed on a trampoline. However he jumped back up and landed on the airplane. The airplane started to crash because of his weight. The boy got a parachute from the crew member of the airplane an jumped off. He was safe but when there was 3 meters until ground, he crashed because the parachute was picked by a bird. He broke his arm. He promised to himself that he would never fly again. When he was an adult, he rock climbed. But he fell down so he flew. He saw an airplane. He forgot to bring his glasses so couldn't see what type was the airplane. The airplane was an aircraft called F-16. It was so fast that he couldn't get in. The co pilot pulled him inside and gave him a seat. However, the plane got attacked by a U.F.O. He flew into the space ship and controlled it because it was controlled by an remote controller. He became a hero. For saving the citizens, he got a parachute and a jet pack to land. He married with a women and had a baby. The baby had the powers to fly too but he couldn't land, also the baby only flew very high. Not even low like his father. He goes out to space but he doesn't die even though there was no oxygen. Since he is a baby, he evolves into a baby that can live without air. He also becomes a hero in Mars because he saved a martian's life by catching him in the air when the martian was rock climbing and fell. Both became a hero but in a different planet. They both lived happily ever after.














Sunday, August 12, 2012

Ode: To. Air conditioner

 To. Air conditioner


      How you make me cool and have peace. You will make me happy until you break. Until I'm cold, you work so hard. When it's cold, you can rest peacefully. You let me rest. You let me sleep and you let me dry my sweat.


    
 You are a good friend. You are a good co worker. I the winter, you make me sneeze. I the summer, you make my peace and rest. If you die, my hot wins. You are the only one that can defeat the strong heat. Good for you, good for me.


















Reflective essaySpring

 Hello. I am Steve and I am the owner of this blog. Today, I would like to write about the first part of the movie called "Spring". This part is about a little  boy monk tying animals to rocks such as fish, frog and a snake so they can't move. The old monk ties a rock on the boy monk to make him feel almost the same as the animals. The old monks says that if you untie them, he will be free too.  He goes and the fish and the snake dies, only the frog lives. He cried and felt bad and sorry for the animals that he killed. It was hard to define the lesson. I will tell you the lesson and you will know what the lesson is after reading all of my experiences that relate to the lesson that I think.



 The first experience happened when I was in kindergarten. Our family went to a water valley during summer vacation. There were lots of dragon flies and my dad told my big brother and me the types of dragon flies. We caught 3 to 4 dragon flies. We put them in a bag that was visible what was inside in the bag. We didn't open a hole because they can escape. They were brought home. However, the dragon flies all died. I think they died because of lack of air. We all thought that it is our fault because if we didn't catch them, they could have lived good and happily ever after. We learned that we should think before we catch animals.

 The second experience is when I played soccer. The ball was coming and I just kicked it before I thought about kicking it. The reason was because if I kicked the ball to our team's player, our team would score a goal. I kicked the ball and the ball went to the opponent so our team lost. I did not think before I did something.
 
 The last experience is when I bought a toy. I bought a toy at a market. On the cover of the toy, there was a picture of a lion swimming in the water. So I thought it was interesting so I bought it. However, it broke right away. I looked at the box carefully and the bow said that it is not water proof. It is just a toy.  I wasted my money. I should have thought before I bought the toy.

 In conclusion, can you guess what is the lesson? I hope you will know and the lesson is think before you do something. The young monk did not think before he tied rocks on animals and thought later. My experience such as dragon flies, soccer and the toy relates to the lesson and proves that the lesson is right. Also, it is a example of this lesson. Thank you.


Sunday, August 5, 2012

DIAMANTE POEM








                                                                   water
                                      important     beneficial
                             swimming       flowing        drinking
                                    water   valley   sea   water
                             swimming       fishing          playing 
                                      salty                  dirty
                                                   water 
                          

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Friday, August 3, 2012

Kony 2012

Hello. This time, I would like to talk about Joseph Kony. He is the leader of the LRA, Lord's Resistance Army. He is a really bad criminal because he committed murder, kidnapped children and turned them into soldiers who were forced to kill their parents or into sex slaves. In the mid 1990's, Sudan's military supported the LRA so it became stronger and in 1978, the LRA had about 60,000 to 100,000 child soldiers. Also, they threatened north Uganda and their flag has red, black and blue in order. Because of these horrible crimes that he committed, a man named Jason Russell decided to make a video and make Kony famous to make it easier to catch him. He actually went to Uganda and met people who escaped from the LRA and Kony so there are many evidence. However, some critics against Russell think that making him famous to catch him is a futile effort. There are many arguments regarding criminals famous to catch them. As for me, I agree with the use of Kony 2012 video to capture Joseph Kony because many criminals were captured using this method.  this video can actually make countries and Ugandan people to stop supporting the LRA.  It can also influence people to help catch Kony, the government to help and the world to support this project.
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First, many criminals were captured by using this method. Putting pictures of the criminal has been highly successful because by informing the general public existence of the criminal and urgent necessity to catch him, we were able to induce voluntary actions of people, which will also help us catch Kony. There are ample precedents of using video to catch criminals. Furthermore, it will make people get involved and to the project, such as financial donation. With such help from public, Kony 2012 will also be successful in catching the bad Kony.



Second, this video can actually make countries and Ugandan people to stop supporting the LRA. It can make Sudan or threatened people to stop supporting the LRA and tell them how it is safe in the United States of America and give an example such as Jacob, how he is safe now.

In addition, it can influence the government and the world. The reason that the United States of America's government decided to help Uganda is that this video and those who watched convinced the president of  the government to take action. Kony 2012 will catch Kony. given the global attention and assistance.

In conclusion, I agree with the use of this video to catch Joseph Kony because many criminals were captured by this method,  this video can actually make countries and Ugandan people to stop supporting the LRA, influenced people to catch Kony and because it influenced the government and the world. I think Kony should be stopped.




























Friday, July 27, 2012

My first essay!!!!!!

 Hello. I am Steve the owner of this blog. From now, I will tell you three things that I know to be true. I chose these three things because they are somehow interesting. I am writing this because it is my GLPS writing assignment. The three things are bananas are not good when it rots. Next, aliens exist and finally the dormitory is dirty and there are many bugs in the dormitory.

 Bananas are not good when they rot. If it rots, yellow color turns into brown and flies lay eggs on the bananas. Also, it becomes slimy so if you bit a bit, it will collapse. You will get sick. Since there are many bacteria and bugs, if your immune system is weak, you might get sick for a long time.

 Aliens exist. There is a case called Roswell case I think. The U.F.O crashed on a city called Roswell. There are witnesses and there is a dead alien. The second piece of evidence are pictures and photos of aliens and U.F.Os. There was a picture of a U.F.O in a Egyptian tomb. Also, someone took photos of the U.F.O in Seoul and other countries such as the U.S.A, Mexico, China and Brazil.

 The last thing is GLPS dormitory is dirty and there are many bugs. There are spiders underneath the desks. When I first came here, there was hair everywhere and there was dust in the drawers. Also, there were chip crumbs in the drawers. When I went to the laundry room, there were the second version of grasshoppers everywhere. The second version of grasshoppers have parasites that eat organs. Finally bottom, there were bugs everywhere and the mosquito net had holes in it so flying bugs such as moths and mosquitos came inside my dormitory. 

In conclusion, the three things I know to be true are bananas are not good when they rot, aliens exist and the GLPS dormitory is dirty and there are many bugs. Please leave a comment if your done reading. Thank you for reading.

Thursday, July 26, 2012

Hello!

Welcome, I am the owner of the blog. Please give me comments about my writing and thank you. My name is GyungJun Kim and you can just call me Steve.